by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jan 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Wipe away the golden, crystal ashes, |
by Kelso
I like this poem. very discriptive and it makes you feel like your there. |
Wow. This was just.. breathtaking. I love the emotion, description & everything in this poem. The flow was flawless. Nothing seemed forced at all. & Your choice of words was wonderful [as usual]. |
Nightingale |
by Tammie
This is amazing. My favorite stanza was the second one and I love this line; "Change can hurt but love can defy." Excellent. I can't describe how well you've written this, it seems like you put so much into it and it worked out so well. The emotion, phrazing, descriptions, flow, rhyming, it all fit together perfectly to make such a strong poem. Excellent write. 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Wow, sheena, that was pure passion right there. at first i didn't feel like reading something long, but i saw the comments and thought i should. i was glad i did too. the wording is wonderful. i love your vocabulary! |