AWESOME poem. ur poems is soo cool. at first i thought it was in a different language or somethin, but i caught on. thx 4 the comment u sent. peace out

Haha. wow. that was fun to read. a tad of a butt to read, but good.

I would post this under slang-poems -> life/society.

I didn't understand the meaning of this one - mostly because I don't understand US slang. :-P (english isn't my primary language)

Anywas of what I did understand was good. Rhyming was ok and so was the flow. But you could use more commas, periods etc. :-)

Keep it up.

-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

Uhm. i found this poem a bit hard to read considering it was written in not even slang but i pronunciations or w\e. so like i had to read it twice. because like the first time i was to buisy looking for the words that i didnt understand. but other then that. good job..