I understood it! I understand perfectly. It's very good and has a lot of meaning and I loved the symbolism (hope I spelled that right..hehe) Well anyways, I loved it. I'm the first to vote and the first to comment. Yay for both of us. Hehe

Love Always
~Casey J

I didn't quite understand ALL of it,
BUT what i did understand I cared for deeply.
plz if you dont mind could you write me a message fully explaining so i can understand compleatly^^
but if you dont its ok^^

I did really enjoy it so off i go to read more of what you wrote^^

I loved this poem! It had this mysteriousness about it. This eerie feeling in such a neat way. It was like a fantasy poem to me. I loved the sensations it gave. I really enjoyed these two lines

Although life leads to death,
we are blessed for every birth.

I thought that was very original and a positive outlook on a negative situation. Nice job David! Thanks for your entry. I commented on two on your featured, and then this one....so keep a look out!
Nice job!
Charisma*

U have a orginal out look i enjoyed your poem

Yu have a gr8 way with words:d
ur an awesome poet:D
keep up the wonderful poems:d
tk care
breex

Excellent. Enjoyed the symbolism, thought it really fitted with what you were trying to say, really made the poem strong. Was beautifully written, flawless.