This poem is awesome and has one of the most unique styles in P&Q. You did an excellent job with a very different way of writing. I'd love to see more using this style. 5/5

~jas~

Comment # 4

depressing but another great one.. i love to read differnet styles of poetry... ive never heard of this one but its nice.. i love how the reapeated line.. that really leaves an impression.. definitly my favorite poem so far

Comment # 4

depressing but another great one.. i love to read differnet styles of poetry... ive never heard of this one but its nice.. i love how the reapeated line.. that really leaves an impression.. definitly my favorite poem so far