WOW! this was great, i really liked this. It tells a hearbreaking story :(, very well written. Keep it up 5/5

Wow this is also another one of your..keep it up..5/5

Great poem with great emotion showing, keep up the great work

Wow. i loved this poem! it was amazing, and the topic was wonderful. i felt that the story was great too! the only thing is this line:

A choice to choose

is a little redundant. other than that...great! 5/5

I didn't really get the begining...But that was just me and I got it later on in the poem. I really liked the last part...I give you a 5/5 even though I ddn't understand the top because I think it was over all a really good write... and I got what it meant in about the middle...

~Shae