It's strange that when something we cherish so much is gone or lost we tend to blame ourselves, when most of the times it is not our fault at all. Amazing job 5/5 great flow also

This is another good poem cindy, i loved the closing stanza, i give it a 5/5!!! keep up the good work!!! and have a good weekend!!!

"Tonight when I lay down to sleep
I'll pray to the Lord above
That you know how much I cared
And you'll somehow feel my love."

I can relate to this poem in so many ways Cindy
5/5
*Gem*

Another great one.
You are one talented writer.

I know how your feeling I see your pain. You will find happiness in your life. Remember how many people love you.

Very pretty but sad Cindy. Hope you soon feel better. Very good flow and rhyme on this one. 5/5

Woah. I've been trying to write something like this for such a long time. I feel exactly like this. And...I don't know if this was meant to...but it made me cry. =/ Amazing write. I loved it. 5/5

-` Liz

Hey a very touching poem. xx

This poem is sad but beautiful. your words are so powerful, i kept captured by your emotions.
much love, Tara-Kay
x

Another 5....is there anything else
beyond 5?

Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
^_^

~Sablehuskey~

Very good write. everything fell into place nicely. beautiful and sad.

Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real youll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotions. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

This is simply outstanding, so much of passion & words which could be felt right from heart...lovely write

all the best and take care

I really like your last line here, beautiful poetry.

Love the poem...i really liked it cindy keep on doing the great work

Pretty deep poem... :( I'm sorry. I know how it feels... =( 5/5

D_P

Just...beautiful.
The last stanza hit me hard, I thought it had huge impact.
This...is perfect.

Another great poem Hun.. this one could even be considered a lost love poem.. its beautiful.. yet so full of sorrow and longing