by Tammie Jan 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Light casts a shadow of her silhouette |
by RetroRavey
This one I REALLY liked! My only hope for tomarrow is that it will be easier... I enjoyed reading this. |
Well done!!......just great n the flow was perfect..n it held soo much of beauty n hope...well said....powerful!... |
by Katie
Oh my god... I love this poem so much. The story and meaning to it so unreal. Extremely powerful. |
by David
Whoa this poem has intertwined emotion and contriversy. the rhyming was excellent. i expect nothing less from you, cause you are simply a great poet! |
by MyDevotion
Very powerful stuff, considering you hardly rythme at all and the point comes across twice as strong because of that shows true talent! Excellent!!!! =) 5/5 |