Comments : Broken Inside

  • 17 years ago

    by Lutu

    Soo amazing poem! I love it! Feel meaning behind every word

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great job, the poem had a rhythm flowing ever so smoothly and the the meaning was never compromised by an attempt to force the rhyme. Absolutely jaw-dropping write. This poem deserves to be in the Top Poem Section no questions asked.

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Well done Astryd

  • 17 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    I love this poem!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kathleen

    Amazing poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Amazing. Such a great write! I don't know why but I feel such the same way about my past bf's. Such a great write. Again, amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    "have you ever been in love only to learn the whole time it was not real". I can surely relate to that. nice write

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the language use in this poem! good job! choice of words was good! flow was okay! well done! 5/5!