Nicely done sweets
In all my time on this site, i haven't seen a poem about ol' Nessie.
Now i have =) And a nice dark and stormy one too =)
I hope you're feeling better now x
5/5
*Gem*

Verry nice and wisely writen

COMMENT # 4

very clever poem.. ive never read one about this... lol :D the flow AGAIN was completely flawless and the word choice was wonderful.. very descriptive and a very enjoyable read.. and you will be recieving your other 4 comments from my friend (because it was a joint contest) sometime this week

A bit long, but over all good, 5/5.

I really liked the imagery you used in this poem, it hooked me from the beginning and was consistent throughout. The loch ness monster has always fascinated me, which made your poem even more enjoyable!

By the way, if you are interested, there is a new forum where you can post your poetry, artwork, music, or any other accomplishment you are proud of. It is a brand new site, and we are looking for nice, active members, so try it out at www.azurerain.com/forum ! Note it is also possible to upload your own files and host them from the site ; ) Hope to see you there ^^;