Even The Furniture Bleeds

Another absoultely wonderful poem, really truly wonderful. i didn't really get it all that much, i'm sure if i sat down and really read into it i'd get it, but it was truly deep, you have outstanding talent, great job! 5/5 again, of course

Very interesting! But in a good way of course! I've never read anything like this before! It was just pure originality, I love that about your poems! Lots of poems seem to look the same after a while..but yours definitely broke that trend! THANK YOU! 5/5

I very much enjoy the odd sense of words. I mean odd as in, not seen so often, but a joy to come upon on occasion. I think you've got great talent, and could make something out of this. People wouldn't get bored of reading it. :)

Your writing is so unique and i feel that makes you stand out as a poet. the way this poem ended was amazing. it made me want to read more! wonderful job, keep up the superb work. 5/5

Okay.. so to be totally honest.. this is a really great poem.. i disagree i think the flow is fine and its a beautiful poem.. the depth of it does seem a little forced.. but i still really like this poem.. great job!