by .K.i.T.t.Y. Jan 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
All the world's a painting, |
I love it! This one is very awesome! |
An excellent read! A really nice picture is created through your words, i really liked that about this poem. I loved the vocabulary you used all through this poem, it made me as a reader really drawn into it. It had an excellent flow, and the structure was good. Thanks for sharing and keep writing! xx |
by kiesha
Wow. Are you an artist? I never really thought of life in that aspect before. You have added another perspective to my thinking. Thanks. |
Very good poem kitty, i didnt see any mistakes, great flow for a non rhyme poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
Spectacular poem.. written beautifully... i love it.. and btw the poem you read wasnt true .. i never have nor will ever cut myself :]P |