Very good, i liked this alot, it was nice, but if i remember correctly from my background in lit and art, doesn't yellow represent the bitterness and decay of society, but still 5/5 great poem.

Spectacular poem.. written beautifully... i love it.. and btw the poem you read wasnt true .. i never have nor will ever cut myself :]P

Very good poem kitty, i didnt see any mistakes, great flow for a non rhyme poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow. Are you an artist? I never really thought of life in that aspect before. You have added another perspective to my thinking. Thanks.

An excellent read! A really nice picture is created through your words, i really liked that about this poem. I loved the vocabulary you used all through this poem, it made me as a reader really drawn into it. It had an excellent flow, and the structure was good. Thanks for sharing and keep writing! xx

I love it! This one is very awesome!