by firexdancer Jan 26, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The pain, it hurts, I dont know why |
by Nix
Great poem, wording is superb. Rhyming is unusual and poem is very unique. You can describe your emotions amazingly. Well done, another 5/5. |
Now this, was excellent. Your poems are much stronger when they follow an proper structure. I liked this a lot. The flow was spot on, and the rhyming was wonderful. It was excellent. |
by stefanie
Wow. this is deep. it really is. i like the flow. it made it more interesting to read. keep up the good work |
by taeya
Hey, |
Wow!! this poem was sooo nice! written very well great flow and good rhyming! 5/5 |