I really really liked your poem, it was amazing, the rhymes the way it was set up the comparison to the butterflies all of it just amazing...keep up the awsome work |
by Jenni
This was such a beautifully written poem. everything tied in well and it told such a vivid story. After I read the lines, |
I like so liked your poem. The best thing about it was the flow, really nice..... |
by Cella Bella
This poem flows beautifully... though in the first stanza, where it says, "I forced..." It should be I'm forced. Besides that it's a wonderful read. |
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by firexdancer
I love you all! |
by Marjan
Gabriella, this was pretty well written. |
"The pain, it hurts, I dont know why |
Wow. VERY good. One of the most cliche topics and you made it non-cliche. I'm very proud of you. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I really don't know what to say about this poem. it is just beautifully written. i'd give you a ten out of five if that is possible!!!!! |
by N J Thornton
For your age, that was ok. I'll be honest and say it was on an overused subject, and although there was the occasional overused description in there, I have read a lot worse. |
by amelia
This is excellent & wow what a thought to it... |
Oh i loved this. . .It flowed beautifully. . .I love it when you reapeat some of the first stanza in the last! |
Really really liked your poem, it was amazing, the rhymes the way it was set up the comparison to the butterflies all of it just amazing...keep up the awsome work |
Wow. This was AMAZING. It flowed really well & everything was so perfect. Nothing seemed forced at all. It was such a cliche topic, but you wrote it so well, so different. Very creative & unique. I loved that. & The imagery was really good, too. The wording was awesome! Good vocab. as well. |
by Just Lucy
Oh wow, that was so strong, i loved it! great great work hun! the flow was beautiful and your words are fantastic! |
Wow!! this poem was sooo nice! written very well great flow and good rhyming! 5/5 |
by taeya
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by stefanie
Wow. this is deep. it really is. i like the flow. it made it more interesting to read. keep up the good work |
Now this, was excellent. Your poems are much stronger when they follow an proper structure. I liked this a lot. The flow was spot on, and the rhyming was wonderful. It was excellent. |