I could'nt figure out werethis was going but the end blew me away
love it

Now that was a poem!!
I like poems that read as a conversation with the reader, it makes it very personalised.
Reading I was wondering what significance this man could possibly have. But the ending was subtly clever. A penny dropped (excuse the pun) as to who this man actually was, and I felt my soul move (cheesy explanation I know).
The langauge was straight forward, which in this case was good.
I would suggest using capital letters in the appropriate places though because not only is it gramatically correct, it looks easier on the eye. Plus, it's only what publishers would do anyway hehe.

Thanks for sharing.