The Night We Fell In Love

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 26, 2007


I remember the night we met like it was just yesterday.
When we locked eyes, my world aroused a new life.
It was the moment my heart waited for a while.
And in a New York minute it beat faster every time.

I never felt so alive before I saw your freckled face.
It was love at first sight and I knew it right then and there.
It was such an engaging experience I can't forget.
And I'll never doubt that the love was true and rare.

The night was still young and we had a lot to tell.
You told me that you're glad you came here tonight.
I respond with "I'm happy you did too." with a smile.
And I knew you're the one when love felt right.

To this day we're still together stronger as we go on.
I still remember the night I first saw your face.
Even though it was long ago almost a year.
And when I'm in your arms, it takes me back to that place.

The place we met for the first time.
Where we knew we'd be together soon enough.
I like to go there sometimes by myself.
And think about that night, when we first fell in love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. It's so cute. ^_^ It's just..amazingly cute. Lol.

    I liked the emotion in this. I really felt as if it was me who was falling in love. I liked that atmosphere you put around me. It gave me chills, but the good kind lol.

    The flow was really good near the beginning, and then it started to get sloppy. Try to keep the same flow all the way through unless it's intentional. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Beautiful Poem!!!! voted 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Greatttt poem.. i like it a lot...nice flow .. a little cliche but still nice.. keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Cute poem, watch your flow on a few places, but it was good, i liked it. really nice job 5/5