Comments : The End Nonetheless

  • 17 years ago

    by • Antihero •

    Excellent.
    Another 5/5!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    This poem was UBERLY awesome... but i love all your poems!!!!

    5/5
    youre an awesome writer!
    Allanah

  • 17 years ago

    by Coeur Cassa Sage

    Wow. Alot of descriptive words.

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    Nicely written! The flow of words are amazing... And the depths of imagination are really creative...

    This portrait I paint of sheer innocence
    Is but a mess of paint
    See where the softest touch revolt
    A fading last restraint

    Beautifully penned...