That's such a beautiful inspirational poem! Keep up the wonderful work. |
The use of words were good so was the flow! :-) I aslo liked the repeating of the "Use it to"-part in the beginning of every stanza. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Mm that was nice.. i enjoyed that one. |
REally cute poem. i enjoyed reading it very much. it flowed very well. it was like a cool rhythm. i really liked it. the only thing/line i didnt like was this one; |
by David
The words you used were magnifico! lol. chem i have found can be boring at certain times, well nearly all the time. |
by N J Thornton
This is one of those poems that if you don't already know the title, it will leave you in suspense as to the meaning until the very last line. In which case you'll want to go back and read it again to clarify your understanding - it's a clever tool. |
Aww I really enjoyed this poem. I think imagination is a wonderful thing. You did and excellent job writting this. The flow was really good. I loved it! |
by Tamsin
Neat! this was really well written :) |
by Edward D Zurovec
Wow , you need to be bored more often with writes like this. Very creative and nicely worded , Great poem!! 5/5 |
by amoxi
U seem like u write better when ur bored, but maybe thats just me i loved this poem ur a great writer keep it up 5/5 |