by M 4 Michael Jan 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Its hard to say i love you, |
by Hollywood
Humm i like the out line of the poem but i do think that you should get a little more in depth about it like make it sound like you are confussed i mean we as the readers need to feel what you are feeling see what you are seeing smelling what you are smelling! But i do like it. |