Mustn't Caress My Sweet Love

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Jan 27, 2007


This is mine,
My treasure,
Your loss.

You let her slip,
Through you fingertips,
Proving unworthy,
Of standing strong.

Her beauty is mine,
To seduce and fascinate,
In the towers,
Of her safeguard.

Caress and stroke,
Upon sweet misery;
Come close,
And suffocate senselessly.

Feel the wrath,
Through the blaze,
Shot from my mouth,
To your soul.

Sense the pain,
From my power,
Of the swish,
My tail strikes.

Mess with the treasure,
And deal with me;
The living hot-headed,
Dragon from Hell.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was an awesome poem....thanks for the "comment back" haha....5/5...comment back(lol) if you want haha

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow.. amazing. I loved every bit of it. I normally don't like poems that don't rhyme, but this one didn't need rhyme to make it good. The flow was very good. I loved you word use; they were so descriptive. You did a very lovely job writing this poem!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Really really good! loved it!

    love the flow of it... and the way you put the words... and most of all i loved the ending...

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not sure I liked the ending as much as I should, but I enjoyed the rest of the poem immensly. It's very deep and just simply amazing. You don't rhyme and I usually hate nonrhyming poems, but your flow is perfect which makes it great. Keep it up.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really enjoyed this read, the imagery was clear and wonderful, really powerful. I liekd the fact that these lines were so short, yet told so much. I liked the style and structure of it. The flow was also good. I really enjoyed this, you have clear talent. I was hooked from teh begining. keep up the great work! xx

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