Good job! Very good word choices. Take Care Cindy

Like nasty poems, lol
5/5 elisha

Ooooooo if u were trying to portray hatred u did it 5/5

Thank you these comments rly help fanx xxxxx

The evilness that you feel for this person is felt. May you one day have peace and joy fill your heart.

sadaddy

Really good

Mmmm brutality... i like it... very powerful!

Very good. Very good. this was great.

Sounds like Freddy Kruger, scary