Ashley, That is the point of being creative. They were able to relate dating to something else and it worked. i really liked it. It may not be a poem that will win first palce or anyhting but that is not what writing is about. people may not write on the same level as you or the same way either. instead of writing lost love poem about not finding the right guy she or he i forgot who wrote it, anyways they turned it into a funny poem. we seem to reject the unfimliar, not just ashley but i noticed that a lot on this site. people seem to be stuck with a traditional way of poetry with every other line rhyming and the same amount of syllables in each line but poetry is so much more than structure anyways sorry for writing a lot i just had to get hat out, good job i really like it.

I don't get it
Wat's so funny about cards anyway?

Titi at the end I turn gay because i'm fed up with not gettin the right man. Don't worry ppl if you don't understand it, seriously, alot of people don't understand shakespeare and he's one of the best witers in history. :)