Ya i wrote a new poem 2day its called Thid day of love/Up above check it out its pretty sweet oh and gavin talked about u again lol and ya great oem 5.0

This is a really nice and deep poem My favorite stanza was this one below:

You created me
A worthless nerveless soul
It was you that caused the heartbreak
That caused the rest to fall

It made so much sense to me in a weird way. I would have never though of something like that also i felt like it was something very powerful to say against a mother even though you may not be talking a bout a mother.I really liked this poem Keep Up the great work!! Hope to see some more around the site!!Take care!!
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(P.S Keep up the really great writing)

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O.m.g. i lov3 this po3m gr3at job is so d33p and so tru3!!! i can r3lat3 to it actually on3 of ma po3ms is kinda lik3 this lolz
GR3AT JOB 5/5 D3F!
======cynthia m. =]