First time

by XfromwithinX   Jan 27, 2007


Like the first blossom on a tree,
you were the first flower in my heart.
The first time you held my hand,
it was like a lambs first bleat.
Like a cool breeze on a hot summers day,
you were the first and only person I trusted with my life.
But just like spring,
we didn't last.

I know I know it doesn't rhyme but I think it gets my point across :) dunno tell me what you think.

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I like this one better too bad lol

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Yep well done i can see the point you did get it across :-]

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Dont say nonsnce, your poem is reallly grt, you are starting to judge your self, just write and dont give a damn what some one says, they are kl...