by BleedingAngel Jan 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Let us go back |
Good.. |
That is a great poem I loved the way you put the words together |
by Delie
Yes. its a really great poem. it, in my eyes, shows how people can final;ly get the courage to stop being abused or wtv! 5/5 |
That's right, you take a freaking stand, lol. There is a time in life that it is all just enough crap. This poem was simple, but it has a way of getting the reader all fired up and ready to take some kind of positive action, to better their lives in a way. I like it. |
Usually I don't like rhyme schemes such as this but this would probably be one of the few exceptions. |