Can You Do It? (short)

by Sandra D   Jan 27, 2007


You wake up every morning
To start a new day
Just then you realize, it's all the same
Everyday you get out of bed
Hoping, praying today's different
But you're not even fooling yourself
Yet you still face every day
The same things, same faces,
Same signs, and the same places
Can you do it?
Can you trick yourself into thinking yesterday never happened and today's brand new?

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol...i can soo relate...siple words used..but it had a great effect on the emotion n truth portrayed in this wrk!...Good job!
    kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Yup i really can relate to this as this is what i feel most days of my boring life we need excitment fun dont we :d

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow so intense, I have this feeling every time I wake up. But sometimes you just have to hold your breath and belive that tomorrow will be better, and if its not well all you have to do is realise that the bad thing(s) that happened yesterday are over and done with. Very interesting topic to write about, I am very glad you did because I dont see very unique toppics like this one very often. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I think this was a good poem but maybe you should try to put a little bit more feeling into it....overall though i think its good.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This is how i feel some days.

    i like the words you used. they really made an impact on how this poem turned out. it was very effective. i loved it! excellent. 5/5

    David

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