This is a really good poem ciao, love the new name, love the flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! ps, this belongs in the lost love section.

Yeh i agree it belongs in the love section. i really like this good job =)

This is a great poem...

so sad...but very good.. good job!

~michelle~

WOW WOW WOW!!! This poem was sooo good. I loved this line.

Now we're alone, all for one and one for none

That was just amazing! I only had one suggestion. In lines 10 and 11 you use the word 'slowly' twice, and it just throws it off a little.
Oh and in line 9 'you' should be 'your'. Hope that helps, and congrats on 2nd!
Charisma*

Great poem, really explains some of the darker sides of life love the expression of feeling definitly a poem I'd read again! Still on my fav's!!!!

-Emia Nicole

Yay I can comment on friendship poems again :]

This poem describes well the impact can have on a persons personality and how it can change them... It flowed nicely and was very well written... Well done xx

Thanks for entering my contest :]

Great poem again! loved your use of words, it really painted the message you were trying to get accross:) excellent work 5/5

Omg this poem was soooo good i had 2 read it again...good job!

This poem was amazing. It really is true as well, lovely job!! It was amazing 5/5!!!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~