A Good poem full of emotion :))

Great work....filled with intense emotions..u've portrayed your thoughts well thru this work...but maybe working a li'l on punctutions would give the poem a better look....otherwise...wel done on this one!
xxPoojaxx

After hearing "i want to be a friend of you"
please, don't let me hear "this is not what i feel"

i felt that every word was close 2 my heart .. it's a very well-expressed piece of art:)

To reach out for the other one is such a scary thing to do.... But if you want to win the heart of the one you love you have to dare and take that first step. Just go for it, that's my advice always and when you fail...next time around you will be able to reach out with less fear because you have done it before and you know you will survive even if the answer is "no" You have nothing to lose and everything to gain! Like friendship... ore love lol!!

Take care, little bro

5/5 Big sis

Great poem mate.

I really like when you wrote:

After hearing "i want to be a friend of you"
please, don't let me hear "this is not what i feel"

5/5

So impressive

so emotional

it got me bount to it

i loved it

great job

Good Luck
Her Guardian

Wow .. this is a great peice... well done

Wow i red all your poems,its really amazing.well done...:) u---> to my favorite authors.ur poems really touching

Wow dude.. pretty good.. keep writing bro.. nice

Nice rhyming. Another lovely poem.

XxXKristie MarieXxX

Nice poem

Well writen poem, the only thing i could think of was that maybe you could seperate each stanza and i think that would help the flow of it but other than that it was a beautiful poem..tara

Aw thats so cuute,
well done!

Thats a sweet poem =)

Wow, this was an awesome poem.It is the same felling I had when one of my friends was really offending me.
very wonderful.