OMG! I can't believe how amazing this poem is. I mean the perspective on this poem was such an exellent idea....I would have never thought of something like this, but your phrasiology was really moving and I felt like I was there witnessing the tragic deaths. You did such an amazing job on this, Charisma! I know I've said this a lot recently on your stuff but this is definately one of your best...you have grown so much in your writing. Keep it up girl!!! 5/5 for sure, I wish I could vote higher! :)
~Midnight Sun

It gave me chills! it is amazing! it's fantastic.. wow! i can't describe it..
great job
5/5
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Oh. my. freaking. gosh. i am in like complete and total AWE! this was HOLY MOLEY!!! i am seriously like woah. i loved every single word of this poem. you really really took the idea from the contest and made it amazing. idk if this contest got judged yet or not, but i bet you place, if not get 1ST. this was wow. 100000/5

Wow.. this is really sad .. but the description was AMAZING! and the flow was flawless.. truely beautiful write.. i hope you win this contest! :D