Let Him Go.

by Teria   Jan 27, 2007


I've finally let him go.
Let my love drift away.
But, it's not gone too far.
For, it's back the next day.
Tearing at my heart.
Blowing up my mind.
Making this world and I
extremely too hard to find.
Lost my ways, and lost my love.
Wanting it to be the end.
Because it's too hard,
To lose your love, and best friend.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!!
    This was so beautiful and sweet. yet so very sad at the same time.
    The first line had me completely hooked and I didn't want the poem to end, but when it did I wasn't disappointed.

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Although this poem was short it had very strong emotions... It was very well written... Well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is soo sad.. but i really like it.. your use of simple words really helps me focus more on the meaning of it.. great job! my only suggestion is in this line "extremely too hard to find." its one syllable to long so you may want to take out "too"

  • 17 years ago

    by JacKnife Jessica

    This is a really good poem and i can relate to it like you cannot believe, well i will keep on voting and commenting your poems, hopefully you can do the same........JoJo