by Teria Jan 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I've finally let him go. |
by Jenni Marie
I loved this!! |
by donna
Although this poem was short it had very strong emotions... It was very well written... Well done 5/5 xx |
Aww.. this is soo sad.. but i really like it.. your use of simple words really helps me focus more on the meaning of it.. great job! my only suggestion is in this line "extremely too hard to find." its one syllable to long so you may want to take out "too" |
This is a really good poem and i can relate to it like you cannot believe, well i will keep on voting and commenting your poems, hopefully you can do the same........JoJo |