This is a really good poem and i can relate to it like you cannot believe, well i will keep on voting and commenting your poems, hopefully you can do the same........JoJo

Aww.. this is soo sad.. but i really like it.. your use of simple words really helps me focus more on the meaning of it.. great job! my only suggestion is in this line "extremely too hard to find." its one syllable to long so you may want to take out "too"

Although this poem was short it had very strong emotions... It was very well written... Well done 5/5 xx

I loved this!!
This was so beautiful and sweet. yet so very sad at the same time.
The first line had me completely hooked and I didn't want the poem to end, but when it did I wasn't disappointed.