Whose There To Help?¿

by Just Lucy   Jan 28, 2007


Why am I still up this late?
How come I cant get to sleep?
Why is my mind non stop running?
Why cant I solve these problems I'm having?

How come I can give advice to others
But have none for myself?
How come I can help them sleep
While I'm still up at night?

Who counsels the counselor
Who can help me with the troubles I have?
Y can I fix everyone Else's problems
but can never fix my own

Why the fu ck does this happen to me
Am I really that alone?
I need help someone, anyone there?
Can anyone spare sum time for me?

I try so hard to make sure those around me r OK
That when it comes back to me, I haven't got the time
I need to sort myself out
But I don't know where to start!

I need to get away
Maybe just for a month
Where I don't know anyone
Maybe than I will fix myself.

© Lucy Green

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Aw. This was sad.. But wonderfully written. It flowed pretty well, too.

    How come I can give advice to others
    But have none for myself?
    How come I can help them sleep
    While I'm still up at night?

    ^ sadly, I can DEFINITELY relate to that ;[

    Y can I fix everyone Else's problems

    ^ Don't shorten words in your poems. use proper grammar. Y should be 'Why' & Else's shouldn't be a capital E.

    Can anyone spare sum time for me?
    ^ Sum, should be 'some'.

    I try so hard to make sure those around me r OK

    ^ r should be 'are' and maybe change 'OK' to 'okay'.

    Great job.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    How come I can give advice to others
    But have none for myself?
    How come I can help them sleep
    While I'm still up at night?

    i can relate to this, your poems are so beautifully penned, but so sad.
    5/5
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Sad but wonderfuly written! it was really good! flowed nicely! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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