Sad but wonderfuly written! it was really good! flowed nicely! 5/5

~Kristina

How come I can give advice to others
But have none for myself?
How come I can help them sleep
While I'm still up at night?

i can relate to this, your poems are so beautifully penned, but so sad.
5/5
luv gabriella

Aw. This was sad.. But wonderfully written. It flowed pretty well, too.

How come I can give advice to others
But have none for myself?
How come I can help them sleep
While I'm still up at night?

^ sadly, I can DEFINITELY relate to that ;[

Y can I fix everyone Else's problems

^ Don't shorten words in your poems. use proper grammar. Y should be 'Why' & Else's shouldn't be a capital E.

Can anyone spare sum time for me?
^ Sum, should be 'some'.

I try so hard to make sure those around me r OK

^ r should be 'are' and maybe change 'OK' to 'okay'.

Great job.

Bri [x]