NIce word choices very discrptive. Excellent as always. Love you! Cindy

Wow that is short...very reflective...
what is a Double Haiku....sounds like some Hawaian Drink or dance? Not that I would know either? How did you do? Poem makes you feel cold....

Short and sweet. :}

Good form. I like the fact that it is a double Haiku as this form is so short. Beautiful imagery. Excellent job!

This is really amazing, very nicely penned...all the best for the contest

take care

Aww. i love your poem, 5/5 good job

Woooooooo thanks for the lesson. 5/5 nice poem.

I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

I thought it was good coz you don't see many Haiku poems on here and its cool 2 hav sumthing different

Nicely written
I find it quite hard to write a good simple haiku that has so much meaning, but you pulled it off excellently
5/5
*Gem*

Cool. :D plz read my only nature poem. lol.

Once again....so visually effective....and a real pleasure because the syllables really are correct....Sometimes I have written haikus about 'human' nature...and it's seasons...but then....I'm a Gramma...we can take a few liberties;-)....

This is beautiful work.