Aww i love this..it reminds me of my life..well i went through the same situation just recently actually..but the only difference was that the girl he liked doesn't like him back..she likes someone else..but he doesn't know that. and i really wish he would just open his eyes and realize that he could be so much more happy with me..but i guess he won't do that.
good poem though. i love it. it brings out your feelings. keep on writting. it's an amazing way to get ur feelings out.
and thanks for commenting on my poems.. <3