Wow this poem is absolutely amazing...the imagery was extraordinary and the meaning behind it was so powerful. please keep writing! this is definitely one of my favorite poems here! 5/5

~jas~

I have never read a poem quite like that one. The meaning was clear throughout as was the emotion held in it. You have an interesting way with words and thoughts, I'm looking forward to reading the others. Good work. 5.0/5 You got a five on the first try from me, that's crazy. I usually don't give out fives.

Good vocabulary the rhyming wasn't forced one bit you did an outstanding job bravo!! can't wait to read more of your work