by Kathryn Jan 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
YOU SET THERE AND CUT, |
by WriterX
One basic mistake: "meat". Should it not be "Met"? |
by Perfection
Avoid the caps but it was pretty good and u have som gramar mistakes but u can correct those.. Otherwise it was a good poem so, good job =P |
Wow...caps.....wellcutting is not the thing to do....and if he or she does tell someone..well anywayz meat is meet lol just to tell u...but other than the caps,some typos and some grammar..its pretty good.......4/5 from me =) keep on writing |