No sharing!!!

by Kathryn   Jan 28, 2007


YOU SET THERE AND CUT,
YOU SET THERE IN PAIN.
NO SHARING WITH ANYONE,
JUST BY YOUR SELF IN PLACE.

ON THE FLOOR YOU SET,
THINKING OF ALL YOUR PROBLEMS.
NOT A CARE IN THE WORLD,
JUST CRYING YOUR EYES OUT.

YOU SLICE AND DICE,
YOU YELL AND SCREAM.
YOUR NOT THE ONLY ONE HURTING HERE,
YOUR HURTING EVERYONE ELSE AS WELL.

ONE DAY YOU'LL SEE,
THAT CUTTINGS NOT THE THING.
BUT FOR KNOW YOU DO WHAT YOU DO,
AND THAT IS CUT.

I STILL REMEMBER THE DAY WHEN I FIRST MEAT YOU,
I NEVER THOUGHT YOU WOULD HAVE DONE THIS.
I THOUGHT I WOULDN\\\'T DO IT EITHER,
BUT I STARTED WRIGHT BEFORE I MEAT YOU.

THIS IS ABOUT ONE OF MY BFF\\\'S. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT IT.

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  • 17 years ago

    by WriterX

    One basic mistake: "meat". Should it not be "Met"?

    Also, the Caps Lock seems a bit dissturbing. To the details I do not have to go into. They are your own way of expressing anger. Did you perhaps think of using more metaphors? They tend to add to the climax nicely.

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    Avoid the caps but it was pretty good and u have som gramar mistakes but u can correct those.. Otherwise it was a good poem so, good job =P

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow...caps.....wellcutting is not the thing to do....and if he or she does tell someone..well anywayz meat is meet lol just to tell u...but other than the caps,some typos and some grammar..its pretty good.......4/5 from me =) keep on writing

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