Wow...caps.....wellcutting is not the thing to do....and if he or she does tell someone..well anywayz meat is meet lol just to tell u...but other than the caps,some typos and some grammar..its pretty good.......4/5 from me =) keep on writing

Avoid the caps but it was pretty good and u have som gramar mistakes but u can correct those.. Otherwise it was a good poem so, good job =P

One basic mistake: "meat". Should it not be "Met"?

Also, the Caps Lock seems a bit dissturbing. To the details I do not have to go into. They are your own way of expressing anger. Did you perhaps think of using more metaphors? They tend to add to the climax nicely.