I love him

by christie   Jan 28, 2007


I love u !!
I love u for you .
I love u for the way u make me feel
I love how everyday i wake i think of you
I love how i can be mad at u one day and be happy with u the next but most of all I love u for who u are and who u are becomingggg!!
i love u !!

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  • 17 years ago

    by christie

    No ure not offending at all thank you!

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You should make some corrections- for example, you should capitalize I, and make some lines little shorter. You can express your emotions with some deeper metaphors and descriptions, not by just simple "I love..." Anyway, that's just my opinion, I don't want to offend you.
    Practice makes perfection :)
    Keep up!

  • 17 years ago

    by madilyn

    Good poem i liked it i even read it to my baby lol nice job

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