Good poem i liked it i even read it to my baby lol nice job

You should make some corrections- for example, you should capitalize I, and make some lines little shorter. You can express your emotions with some deeper metaphors and descriptions, not by just simple "I love..." Anyway, that's just my opinion, I don't want to offend you.
Practice makes perfection :)
Keep up!

No ure not offending at all thank you!