Moving

by Michelle   Jan 28, 2007


I wonder if you knew that I had any goodbyes
I'm beginning to see you were just another face
Another lock and key I mistook for a doorway
Another wall for a window

I wonder if you caught on to my heart ache
Your charms are fading and now I see that, again
I fool myself for the fear of never knowing love
And with you I have faltered greatly

I wonder if you saw my longing
I can't help but hold on to a little of what you left behind
It's always with me, but still
The knot in my stomach doesn't twist like before

I wonder if you could catch my thoughts
Your dreams invaded mine and in each one I caught you
Now your image disturbs me, leaves me restless
I push you away

I wonder if you felt my smile on you
The sudden urge to collapse into your arms and wrap my body around your soul
doesn't hold me like it used to
The reminder that I could never have you
Doesn't choke me like before

I wonder if you ever knew

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    I really loved this poem..very cute! ^.^
    This is my fav stanza: "I wonder if you felt my smile on you
    The sudden urge to collapse into your arms and wrap my body around your soul
    doesn't hold me like it used to
    The reminder that I could never have you
    Doesn't choke me like before"

    I just love how you worded everything..
    Just reading your poem gave me a beautiful picture/image in my mind, it was like a masterpeice. Beautiful! BTW thanks for the comment! I am gonna add u as my favorite bc you are so wonderful when you comment! GGod Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by lala

    That was fantastic, it was well written and emotional 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was beautiful, it was so sweet, it flowed perfectly, (write more like this!)
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 18 years ago

    by kiara

    This was very interesting i luv these 2 lines they just struk me as different but moving
    Another lock and key I mistook for a doorway
    Another wall for a window

    keep it up
    5/5

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