Brothers [Sedoka]

by Tammie   Jan 28, 2007


Fun to be around
People to teach and learn from
Protective, nice, caring boys.

Nothing but trouble
Unbearably annoying
Ungrateful, spoilt brats.

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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this poem. I understand it very well as i have 3 older brothers of my own. The style was interesting and your word choice was great from what you were portraying here. A good poem with great effort . Well done with this~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    This poem describes nicely the good side and bad side of brothers, and although very short it says so much... Very well done once again 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Lol... that last stanza was funny... and its crazy how your perspective on boys changes from when youre little (EWWW) to when you get older (still EWWW) haha... just kidding. i kinda like guys now. anyway, awesome poem AGAIN and another
    5/5
    Allanah

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