Lol... that last stanza was funny... and its crazy how your perspective on boys changes from when youre little (EWWW) to when you get older (still EWWW) haha... just kidding. i kinda like guys now. anyway, awesome poem AGAIN and another
5/5
Allanah

This poem describes nicely the good side and bad side of brothers, and although very short it says so much... Very well done once again 5/5 xx

I liked this poem. I understand it very well as i have 3 older brothers of my own. The style was interesting and your word choice was great from what you were portraying here. A good poem with great effort . Well done with this~mel