by Gasttlee
Sounds like me a little. 5/5 |
I really liked this poem. You are very talented. Another good poem |
by Fredy
Don't build a brick wall, and if you do i'll peek inside to read more of your poems. |
I love the symbolic meaning of walls. We all put them up for one reason or another, but they are a double edged sword, a wall can protect us but it can also smother us. Sometimes the hardest thing is tearing down the internal walls we've constructed. An excellent poem with deep meaning. |
by Jackie
It's sad that some feel this way, but excellent poem, well done |
Yup I still have my brick wall.. Ooh goodness u r so damn good! 10/10 -Nessy |
I can really relate to thai poem! it's great, keep it up 5/5 |
I like this poem. Short, but to the point and well done. It really packs a lot of ideas into it that I think we can all relate to. I certainly can. Just not wanting to be the wrong one, to be the one who is always hurt. It's just easier to hide away. Awesome job!! :) |