Comments : My Brick Wall

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Sounds like me a little. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    I really liked this poem. You are very talented. Another good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Don't build a brick wall, and if you do i'll peek inside to read more of your poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I love the symbolic meaning of walls. We all put them up for one reason or another, but they are a double edged sword, a wall can protect us but it can also smother us. Sometimes the hardest thing is tearing down the internal walls we've constructed. An excellent poem with deep meaning.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie

    It's sad that some feel this way, but excellent poem, well done

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Yup I still have my brick wall.. Ooh goodness u r so damn good! 10/10 -Nessy

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I can really relate to thai poem! it's great, keep it up 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waitinf~

    p.s. i comented more, i win! lol :P

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I like this poem. Short, but to the point and well done. It really packs a lot of ideas into it that I think we can all relate to. I certainly can. Just not wanting to be the wrong one, to be the one who is always hurt. It's just easier to hide away. Awesome job!! :)

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.