Bleeding Inside

by Sweet As Sugar   Jan 28, 2007


I wrote this poem with alot of tears in my eyes ..
please write your comments and tell me what you think .
thanks!

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Bleeding inside with no more tears left to cry ..
i sit here wondering ,will i ever find a man who will love me until i die ?

you caused me so much pain, that i never want to love again ..
i wish i could erase you from my memory just when i count to ten ..

you're buried inside my heart, and you're locked inside ..
i tried to pull you out, but i bleeded so much i felt that its about time that i died !

so i put you back inside , and waited for my pain to heal ..
then you're memory came back to me ..
how cruel you were you broke the deal !

i hate you so much now for causing me alot of grief and pain ..
the first step I'm going to do is cut my tongue and sough my mouth so it could stop saying your name !

it didn't work at all ,
damn your like a drug that i have to take ..
but the problem is that this drug is killing me slowly for god sake !

what should i do ?
i cant erase you from my life ..
cause you promised me that someday ill be you're beloved and beautiful wife !

i need help ..
a medicine to erase the image and memory of you in my head !

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  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, your poem is deeply touching and I can really feel how sad you are, but many people hurt me too and crying after what they did to us won't bring them back and won't cahnge anything.now you only have to look forward and i am sure you will find the one who will care about you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Milton

    I know how this feels. they hurt you so much but you can't forget about the way they used to be. and the words they used to say. words that they forgot. I know how bad you feel. but good stuffs

  • 17 years ago

    by Melly

    I know exactly how you feel. i know that there
    are going to be more ppl who are able to
    connect with you on this poem. great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brenden

    This poem is sad but beautiful, it reminds me of how my ex left me! saying she was going to be my wife then the very next day it was over :( keep writing i loved this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    That was a realy good poem you should see some of mine some time!! ^_^
    ~Sablehuskey~

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