"They i shouldn't listen" i thought maybe a word was missing.
but hey the poem was great there was so much feeling in it and it was well written, as always i loved it all of your poems never fail to deliver, ur such a great writer
5/5
~*~Jen~*~

Well done

Great Poem! I loved it!

OKAY! I know this question is going to sound really weird and you can say no if you want it's cool but I was wondering. Since we don't really talk through e-mail. Would you be alright with giving me your number just so we could maybe chat sometime? I'm going to my friends house sometime soon and if you give it to me I could call you on her cell. But I understand if you don't want to. It's so very cool. I know it's a weird question. Sorry...well talk to you later buh-bye!

U're really talted. ur poem is as confused as u r. oddly u still got a aim(that's gut):)

Wow another great poem