by The Queen of Spades Jan 28, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
A delicate beauty |
Wow. i loved the repetition of some lines in this one. it really made them stick out and really had an impact on the other lines. and i love the metaphor of the lost in this poem. 5/5 |
by Antithesis
Overuse of word mind..and the phrase "it's all in her mind".lack of clear structure.but gd job. |