by Cella Bella
This had really good rhyme and flow. the only thing is I noticed in the lines, |
by Jenni Marie
I so0o love this poem! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Wow. this poem is full of strong emotion. not sure what to say about htis. except there is a typo. Poor your heart-pour |
by Tammie
There is such strong emotion in this, I read it as if you were putting so much into every word. I really like it. It really tells the story, with good imagery too. Your rhyming worked well and the flow was great. Overall such an excellent poem. Sorry to hear what inspired this poem though. |
by David
The title first is great. drew me into the poem. made me wonder what this is about. also it is catchy. the poem itself is sweet! |