by Italian Stallion Jan 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Entwining hearts |
This is interesting. Some of the lines however kind of threw me off and got me out of the flow of the poem. The message wsa cute and interesting how it was portrayed however needs a little work. But I understand that it is a club effort so I'm gonna give it a 4 |
by Cyma Khan
Tht was cool poem very lovely done by all...keep up the good work.....5/5 |