Great poem i really liked it, it reminds me of some of my poems. anyways great work shanik

Yea, it's more like a cry out for help that you're doing. nice poem, but if you are really serious about suicide then you should think of ways that will be succesful. take care and float with the wind.

Thnx pplz keep the coments cumin i need the critisim

I like your poem...its how i feel too...but let me tell you dont kill yourself! There is so much to look foward to